by Antonese
Their heads faced against the wall. Around them are their family. The look in their eyes is confusion. Why is there a wall here? Why can't we come? Which gets you thinking. Why do nations create walls? My honest opinion is that nation build walls because they have no trust for others. Fear and greed over rule them forcing things of this sort. They have fear of what the people from other nations might do such as over power them. They have greed and say we have such a nice place which share. Many effects could happen because of this. Our world is already separated with some hate as it is walls will just make it much worse. Nations could go into war because they took the message the wrong way. Nothing positive could come out of complete separation. That brings me to a question on what the president has in our future,so why are we going to make them?
Why Is It There?
By Mackenzie
Why is it there?
It separates them from us.
Lots of people go across.
But lots also get sent back.
People don't like it.
Some die when they pass this hurtful wall.
Its like racism.
Is that why its there?
Some people use it for a way to hurt people.
Some use it to create a better life
Kids ask why is it there?
Others say its not supposed to be there
Some say lets destroy it
But others say its not that easy
It causes so much pain
So I still ask
Why is it there?
By Mackenzie
Why is it there?
It separates them from us.
Lots of people go across.
But lots also get sent back.
People don't like it.
Some die when they pass this hurtful wall.
Its like racism.
Is that why its there?
Some people use it for a way to hurt people.
Some use it to create a better life
Kids ask why is it there?
Others say its not supposed to be there
Some say lets destroy it
But others say its not that easy
It causes so much pain
So I still ask
Why is it there?
9 comments:
i agree with you a lot
I really liked the poem its very strong.I hope that everyone else would like it.
i also think that they should take the border out
I think that this peom is very stron lol im gald you like it.
I think that this peom is very stron lol im gald you like it.
That is really deep antonese and i think your right about the border. Good job on that story
This poem is very well written and very good.It really tells you about the border and why its there.You can really learn from this poem.It is very strong and very interesting.you can tell that She really put alot of thought into it.I really like it.
u r awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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