by JC
Slavery back then.......
Driven far away,
Missing father and mother,
And all the games we used to play,
Shoved into an unknown ship,
While bodies died from hunger and starvation
on the voyage trip,
Taken to places far and wide,
With each place awaited a misery surprise,
One by on we were left in a country,
Unknown to us and we could see nothing,
This was perhaps an instant trade of slavery,
But could of been done?
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20 comments:
I like the poem it has a good point. It actually drivens attention. It makes the reader actually pay attention to it.
C.G
well i really liked this poem . You had a really strong voice. I really enjoyed reading your poem. nice work.
sincerly
gabriela
flores
This poem is really awsome because it tell many things that really true.The feelings of this person who wrote this poem it is really good. I thinks it is really true and makes me think many things about slavery.
this poem really shows and could tell you that being a slavery must have really sucked. i know that no one wouldn't want to be in that position . I liked your poem it had a strong voice !!!
I really like the way this person writes, it's so deep
The poem was really good.The points you brought up were true.I really like the way you write poems.I hope you write more poems so I could read them.
Karen Galvez
I like the poem,it really gets us in that point of view as a slave....It's really great!!!
This poem is really deep and i really like it a lot.It really explains what slavery is about and what the slaves went through.this poem was AWSOME!!!!!you are very deep
I really liked this poem,it really inspired me to be happy of what i have and where i live.I also liked it because it gets your attention!
This poem is true or was true should i say.It tells the deep sorrow that was for slaves.How they were taken from there land and seperated from their parents.What does a person have after that
I think that the poem really would get to people because it is sad and it is what it was a long time ago. I also think that it was wrong what they used to do to African Americans because they are also humans and they had feelings. I mean They wouldn't like it if they were separated from their family and got taken some where to work and get sold like if they were somebodies property. I also think that they all really suffered and they wouldn't want nobody to pass through that and they
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