"love"
Love is it in your heart do you have any love for something.
Ordinary people do have love in them
Very little changes there is one who does not have any love at all
Everyone should help these love less people in our world.
"Run away"
A young couple running to see freedom.
Could they make it to that place.
They are hiding there face.
They are face to face to life or death.
People hunting after them.
"Poor him"
Illegal drugs destroying young dreams.
Look at him he is stealing from his grandmother just to get some weed.
Losing respect from everyone no more trust.
He got lost did not know where to go.
Begging for money but he still lives in the street.
A young girl is called mom at age 14.
Is this even right to be a girl just destroyed her dream.
She flee to be free.
She should of stay in school but now she is begging because she can't have a job.
Her kid was taking away from her they gave it to her parents.
Now she is dieing she has std she was exposed to prostitute.
Dieing alone for her action.
"She can't speak"
Pain is going every where though her body.
She say her dad abusing her mom.
Scared to speak up.
She hides in the corner crying so much.
Her mom and her run away to be free.
9 comments:
The poem "poor him is a truthful poem>This poem is all the truth some people still money from their family to buy illegal drugs and smoke it.Also illegal drugs can destroy you from the in side and the same on the out side.Doing this can make you steal stuff away from family,friends,and etc.This also can make you loss respect for people.Another thing is that you can end up in the streets.
The poem "poor him" is a truthful poem and is a poem thats good for kids to read it and know how the life of drugs can leave you.It really lets kids know many things.This is a true thing many kids do ask money to get drugs those are many of the cases.Many times do end up in the streets and thats sad.This poem does reflect what happens when you do drugs.This poem i think is a good poem for all kids to read.
Wow these poems are deep and so true.These kinda of things happens all to much now.But i love the last one.We need to learn how to speak up for ourselves.Also for many others who cant defend themselves.Poor him was my second fav.I also liked the one before the last one.These are really great glad you put them on ^_^.
The illegal drugs poem was sad to because him stilling from his own grandma his own BLOOD is sad.And all for just a bag of weed.Then people won't look at him the same.They won't trust him anymore.Nobody would want him to live with them.He'll end up in the streets all alone.He won't have the same love and respect he had from his parents.
NORMA G. LOPEZ
MaMaZ=]
It is very wrong for that girl to have a baby at very young age!!! It was very wrong for her to do what she did!!! I don't blame the government for taking her baby away!!!!!! Im sure if i was that baby i would be glad to be tooken away!!!!!!
carlos macias
THIS ONE IS BETTER THAN YOURS NORRRRMA
The poem "she can't speak" is very thoughtful because some dads do abuse there wifes for no reason. Kids do drugs because they think that drugs will mak things better and they get really ill and then they die
The poem"Look At Her"is a really truthful poem..*.This poem really good because it sends a message to all the people that are messing up..
This poem is a truthful thing.It has a lot of affects in it.This makes other people know what could happen to someone like this people went though.They begged for money and the mom had her kid taken away from her.She didn't have the time to be what she would want to be anymore.Her life was going away.
This is a bad way to distroy our lives.
This poem is a truthful thing.It has a lot of affects in it.This makes other people know what could happen to someone like this people went though.They begged for money and the mom had her kid taken away from her.She didn't have the time to be what she would want to be anymore.Her life was going away.
This is a bad way to distroy our lives.
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